Credits: Animation – Carlo Vinci; Layout – Dick Bickenbach; Backgrounds – Sam Clayberger; Dialogue and Story Sketches – Charlie Shows and Dan Gordon; Titles – Art Goble; Production Supervision – Howard Hanson.
Cast: Narrator, Rooster – Don Messick; Huck, Fox, Chickens – Daws Butler.
Production E-38, Show K-008.
First Aired: week of Monday, November 17, 1958.
Plot: Huck vs Chicken-stealing Fox. Both don’t count on angry Rooster, who trees them as they talk about teaming up as roosters on TV.
This is a cartoon with some wonderful examples of gag timing. Bad gag timing. One of two things must have happened here.
• The studio had to rush this through production so they stuffed it with padding and went on to the next cartoon.
• The studio really thought overdrawn-out routines induced uncontrollable laughter.
Here’s a piece of Don Messick’s narration from Cock-a Doodle Huck, describing the arrival of the title character’s nemesis:
FOX: Well, gee whiz! Nobody’s perfect.
Messick does a great job building the dialogue but, gee whiz! It took 29 seconds. For one dialogue gag. Bullwinkle cartoons used to pull off the same type of gag, with the narrator elucidating on Boris Badenov’s evil traits. But Badenov would cut off Bill Conrad after a few seconds and make some kind of funny crack. The timing was perfect. Here, the bit just goes on and on and on, like Charlie Shows needed to find ways to fill seven minutes and couldn’t think of anything, so he let the dialogue run on and on. Either that, or he (or somebody) really thought a 29-second dialogue gag was funny.
I know the Bullwinkle segments were half the length of the H-B cartoons, and I know that Huck had a fairly languid pace about him as a character but, gee whiz! That doesn’t mean the cartoon has to drag.
There are more Get-On-With-It-Already moments later in the cartoon, but let’s not get too far ahead of ourselves.
Next comes the dialogue mentioned above. Inexplicably, Daws Butler uses his Shelley Berman-esque voice for the fox on this one line (the voice he later used for Fibber Fox) but in the rest of the cartoon, he used his Phil Silvers-style voice. Why he changed is anyone’s guess.
Shows puts some alliteration in Messick’s mouth, as the narrator informs us the fox “This pilferer prefers only the plumpest pullets.” We see the fox’s stretched arm feeling the hens for size, and then spend six lonnnng seconds stretching even ridiculously further to pat an anvil and Huck’s nose. But it’s all worthwhile as Huck smashes the fox’s hand with a hammer (out of frame) and we get one of those wonderful pain takes that only Carlo attempted to do. Here are just two of the drawings.
Finally, Foxy decides dress up like a rooster (as first the narrator, and then he, describes what’s happening for unnecessary verbiage’s sake). But Huck has the same idea. The two complement each other on their outfits, neither of which impresses the real rooster, who accuses the phoneys of muscling in on his territory, and chases them up a tree. (I think that’s the same tree on either end of the background below)
The music doesn’t really augment the action all too well. The sound cutter was happy to let the music play through into the next scene and start a new cue in mid-scene. The tunes are familiar to any Huck fan. All but two are Bill Loose and John Seely products and all come from reels L-1 and L-2 of the Capitol Hi-Q Library. My thanks to S. Carras for correcting my old music notes.
0:00 - Huck/Clementine sub main title theme (Hoyt Curtin).
0:26 - ZR-49 - LIGHT EERIE (Geordie Hormel) – Huck scares Fox with rifle; Fox feels chickens.
2:11 - TC 201 - PIXIE COMEDY (Loose-Seely) – More of Fox feeling chickens; Fox uses pellets and magnet to catch chickens.
3:28 - TC 202 - ECCENTRIC COMEDY (Loose-Seely) – More of Fox using pellets, gets shot by Huck; Huck plants egg-bomb; Fox uses bullet-proof vest.
4:50 - TC 303 - ZANY COMEDY (Loose-Seely) – Huck shoots at vest, then Fox’s butt; Fox and Huck dress as cock-a-doodler-dooers, "Uh oh!" 6:07 - TC 202 - ECCENTRIC COMEDY (Loose-Seely) – Pan to Rooster, Rooster chases Fox and Huck up tree.
6:46 - LAF-7-12 - FUN ON ICE (Jack Shaindlin) – Fox suggest he and Huck pair up on TV, Rooster disgusted.
7:10 - Huck sub ent title theme (Curtin).
Well, Gee Whizz! My thoughts are exactly the same with this particular Huck short after watching it first time myself. Was rather hoping by the end for one of the characters to break the forth wall and tell the Narrator to "cut it out!"
ReplyDeleteGood, thorough analysis altogether 8-)
When the fox first speaks and says to the narrator: "Well, gee whiz, Nobody's perfect" he has Fibber Fox's voice, but in the rest of this short, he sounded like Hokey Wolf. I guess Daws had trouble trying to do the voice for the fox.
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